So I was writing a couple things. Late last night and late tonight. Posted it on chat and was told to post it up. Don't know where it goes, but if
the mods have a better place to put it, let me know.
Here ya go:
First one. Lets call It "Fading"
Oh unpredictable world
You betray me, my cold hearted friend
A sudden twist in our fate
Fallen to the ground, where I should stand
Time grows slow, the world will fade
I can hear the willows whispering
A song they will seldom sing
The ballad of a soul, soon to part
In time, all is forgotten
All is forgiven, balance and peace
My time here seems overstay
Enjoy this chaotic harmony
I can hear the rhythmic song
Played within my body, the tempo slows
The song has now been complete
Fallen to the ground, now where I lay
Second one we will call, "The Cursed"
Another day has gone by
Endless walking on this shadowed earth
Among all these fallen soul
I am the only one who is cursed
every night I lay my head
Reveling imprisoned memories
Grabbing onto long lost hope
While weeping sorrowed symphonies
The flood of change strikes again
Leaving behind only dirt and sand
And a house a memories
This lonesome house we built together
And as this endless dream ends
This shadowed earth has done its worst
Among all these fallen souls
I am the only one who is cursed
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Dude yes! Im so glad you posted your art here! Hope you post more later on! Well see ya in chat bro! 
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any feedback appriciated.
not a one liner lol
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Amazing.Very well written.Keep writing.
Ahem..I believe The Duckster is correct here..we need a forum for poetry.
Any Chance Amigos?
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thanks for the feedback. I assume this will be moved to the poetry forum once it is created.
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I only got two replies to this?
And btw, did a peotry forum ever get through?
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