There are some things I like and some things I do not like.
I think the general look is good, with the translucid text over the image and the black background.
The things I don't like:
1 - I don't like too many moving things, and you have text scrolling from right to left and a rotating image. That is too much for me, especially the
scrolling text, most people tend to avoid it now.
2 - The menu bar at the bottom of the page is hard to read, red over blue is not the best option.
3 - Some pages do not have a background for the text, so it becomes invisible over simillar coloured areas ofo the background.
4 - Having an image on the background is good if we are looking at text, but an image over an image gives some strange results and I think you should
not use it.
5 - You have at least two areas with the same menu name that show different information. When we click the "UDF Database" menu on the home page we
see a page, when we click the "Database" menu on the "UDF Archive" we get a different page for what appears to be the same thing, judging by their
names.
6 - By not using HTML pages you have lost two important things, the possibility of going back and forward and the way of showing that a page is being
loaded, when I click on a link I do not have a way of knowing if I must wait for a page to appear or if that link is not working.
Also, I found some errors:
1 - On the "UDF Database" page, you have "realease" instead of "release"
2 - On the "Video Sevices" page your first error is the name on the menu, I suppose it should have been "Video Services". Bellow I show the text
with the errors highlighted, I think it's easier.
Chronostar Graphics is a new branch of our domain, and trough it we offer a variety of video services. We can create anything from
from
Pro
ffessional quality video editing, all the way down to audio archiving and we use DVD media for all of our projects. In this section you can
find information on our prices, a catalog of
standart (standard) styles or how you can create a custom made production.
3 - On the "Web Design" page you have "dont" instead of "don't".
4 - On the "History" page:
When
i first begun this endeavour, it started just as a little comic book
book. Over time with the experience
i gained from
creating all of the graphics and the different versions of the homepage for it, things kinda just started growing from there, and soon people were
asking me to do small projects for them. Eventually
i decided that
i should make my project a little more formal so this gave birth to
Chronostar Graphics. The idea is to be able to provide a few services like Web Design, Graphic Arts, Video Editing and
hte Chronostar Graphic
novel. This is the latest version of our website, and
i'm making it in a way that it will make it easy for everyone to use it, and access all
of the stuff that
i have planned on releasing for it.
5 - On the "UDF Archive" page:
Welcome dear visitor here you will find all the information you need to know about the Chronostar Universe, please feel free to look around,
however be
forewarened The Chronostar Universe is a property of Chronostar Graphics downloading images for profit is not allowed, you may use
any image that is available for download in our multimedia page but the rest are off limits. Please do not try to imitate anything you see our
characters doing you might get hurt or worse, and if you spot any mistakes on our website please point them out so we can fix them.
other than
that have fun and enjoy.
6 - On the "Library" page from the "UDF Archive":
CHRONOS
This
sotry deals with the origin of Chronos and his struggle to save the Earth from being invaded by an alien race
I do not have time to search for more and those errors are just small things that do not have anything to do with the design of the site.
Good luck!
