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THE RAPE POEM. (plagarized content removed)




Topic started on 4-2-2007 @ 01:44 AM by loverofmoses


I WROTE THIS IN 1973 WHEN I WAS 13 AND IT'S HOW I FELT.



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THE RAPE. BY D.F.

Raping me was fun for him.
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SO ANY COMMENTS I WOULD LOVE TO HEAR FROM YOU.

How about "Thou Shalt Not Steal", for starters.
-- Byrd


[edit on 6-8-2007 by Byrd]



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reply posted on 25-3-2007 @ 09:48 AM by clearwater


That's a great poem. You wrote that when you were thirteen? That's amazing. I hope that you keep writing poems.



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reply posted on 30-3-2007 @ 09:37 AM by adamiskthespacepirateking


just a question this wouldnt have anything to do with you would it?
but great poem for a thirteen year old i must say



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reply posted on 15-7-2007 @ 11:41 PM by ChrisJr03


As a "writer" I also must praise this poem; and, I hope you have kept up the writing.



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reply posted on 6-8-2007 @ 09:29 AM by Vixion


That poem is great, got any more ?


Take Care, Vix



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reply posted on 6-8-2007 @ 12:43 PM by Lug



Originally posted by loverofmoses
I WROTE THIS IN 1973 WHEN I WAS 13 AND IT'S HOW I FELT.



SO ANY COMMENTS I WOULD LOVE TO HEAR FROM YOU.


www.poemsforfree.com...

Is this a website that you sent the poem to?



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reply posted on 6-8-2007 @ 01:17 PM by mojo4sale


Hmmm i think someone is telling porky pies.

If that link you supplied is correct Lug then Nicholas Gordon wrote that poem no earlier than the 1980's not 1973.
Are you Nicholas Gordon loverofmoses? If not you should have read this.

poemsforfree


Plagiarizing my poetry is strictly forbidden. If you use or distribute my poems, you must identify me as the author. If you modify my poems to suit your needs, you should add after my name: "modified by (your name)."



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reply posted on 6-8-2007 @ 01:18 PM by Lug


I guess I should really ask if you are the real Nicholas Gordon from Joisey?


Plagiarizing my poetry is strictly forbidden. If you use or distribute my poems, you must identify me as the author. If you modify my poems to suit your needs, you should add after my name: "modified by (your name)."

www.poemsforfree.com...





Sure would be great if he was a member of this website.



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reply posted on 6-8-2007 @ 01:39 PM by SR


LOL caught red handed shameful really.



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reply posted on 6-8-2007 @ 01:53 PM by Crakeur


oddly enough, if you read the poem, it seems to sound like a man raping another man. I thought loverofmoses was a woman.


So? He was boss. On top


and


In my mind an endless blackness,
Nothing within me but blackness
Screamed at the boy no longer there


the boy in his mind was no longer there. meaning the rape destroyed his boyhood, his childhood and turned him into a man with an empty blackness inside.



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